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Solace
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From blinding light to silent shadows,
Tuneful music slows to an end.
One last look back to bloody meadows,
Before I break the final bend.
Tuneful music slows to an end.
One last look back to bloody meadows,
Before I break the final bend.
A short poem with a simple rhyme and structure. i wont give you the meaning, thats for you to find out...but its a simple idea. one word nothing too complicated.
criticism always welcome, any suggestions? dont be afraid to give them to me. its not quite done yet, im looking to extend it by at least another two stanzas.
seano x
criticism always welcome, any suggestions? dont be afraid to give them to me. its not quite done yet, im looking to extend it by at least another two stanzas.
seano x
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short and sweet, as the saying goes.
i like all the s's in this one. usually repetition of letters doesn't sound too great, but yours flows.
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i like all the s's in this one. usually repetition of letters doesn't sound too great, but yours flows.
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